My site

[psisolodier]

Hi guys um this is my site.

www.easypsionics.tk tell me how im doing.

[JediKaren]

very nice site

[psisolodier]

Thanks karen!

[firesea]

very good!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work!

[Apollo]

great site! I just want to comment on a few things to make it a little better. I like the new color too. Please do not take these corrections the wrong way. It is a little long but it will help in the long run. I think you did a good job and I want to proof it. The following is in order from top to bottom:

"Now if you didn't fell anything don't worry just take a brake and try again later"

I think it should be if you didn't FEEL anything (it is in caps to make it noticable)

"Now try shelling it picture the ball"

try putting a period between "it" and "picture"

"Now try shelling it picture the ball turning from water to ice any thing will work just (I picture a coconut ,hard shell soft in side.."

this sentence doesn't really make sense. You might want to reword it.

"imagination make a psi cube"

comma inbetween "imagination" and "make"

"Ok heres my way to do p.k this is a vary simple"

here's (aposterphy) and vary should be vEry (not capitolized)

"Goggle pin wheel"

you meant GOOGLE and instead of saying this, give them a brief description of how to make one.

"Now once you've got one put your"

comma between "one" and "put"

"psi wheel now"

comma or period between wheel and now (you choose)

"and the wheel now concentrate"

take out a lot of the "now"s and check PUNCTUATION

"The wheel is vary sensitive"

vEry not vAry

"you moved it not the wind"

place an "and" inbetween the "it" and "not" (it reads better)

"Tinfoil is lighter try making one out of it"

first, it should have a comma or period inbetween the "lighter" and "try". Second, this is not why tin foil is easier to move. It is because spinning metal on metal has less friction than metal on paper. Just a heads up.

"get it the first time keep trying"

comma between "time" and "keep"

"Also if you caint get the psiwheel try this"

CAN'T

"Youll"

"you'll" or "you will"

"2.a tooth pic"

picK same within next paragraph

"tooth pic and reamber"

picK and reMEMber

"like a dripy faceuet."

driPPY FAUCET

Ok, I finished all the way up to spoon bending. If you want me to go on, just pm, email, or tell me here. Overall, pretty nice. The above may look long, but they are just small corrections. Try to fix punctuation, toothpick (you spell it "tooth pic" and it is one word), and try to take out a few "now"s. If you correct this stuff, people will take you more seriously. Hope this helps.

[foreverypsi]

It is a good start but you should look into the spelling.

[psisolodier]

Thanks guys,and apollo I have a guy whose going to proofread for me but thanks for the offer.also If you have time would you add my site to yours (if you want).

[psisolodier]

ok I corrected everthing on the list and my proof reader should get back to me with any more mistakes.O and I have a fourm now it'll probly have only a few members by the first month but im still advertising.Once again thanks guys.

[Apollo]

i am adding it right now. XPwarrior got a few hits on his website forum thanks to me . My site is P-O-P-you-L-A-are POPULAR! lol

[Apollo]

I am going to link it to the freewebs one, but if you want the tk one, just tell me. Also, something I just noticed. The homepage at the bottom says "Enter Title Here" you might want to change that.

[psisolodier]

Sweet thanks Chris,Though if you would the tk one is better because it requires so many hits a month for me to keep it.That is cool though your site took off like a rocket,heck even psipog has it on there links page!

[Apollo]

I know!!!!!!! Everyone loves it. I got like 50 hits of NEW people on monday! Its crazy.

[firesea]

only! Congratulations

[psisolodier]

Thanks and also Xp warrior sent in an article on precog.If you guys have any articles with little grammer,spelling,etc mistakes just send them to me.

[JediKaren]

*sighs and wishes psipog didn't hate her site*