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Post by storm on Jun 13, 2007 23:59:21 GMT -5
This is my website page www.freewebs.com/findyourenergy and if you have any thing to tell me just go to comments and i will read them every day and i will answer them :-) |
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Post by JediKaren on Jun 14, 2007 18:32:14 GMT -5
well, it needs a lot more work, but it's off on the right direction. If you want, we can talk in private (pm) or I can say what it needs here.
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Post by The Undertaker on Jul 21, 2007 15:36:48 GMT -5
Nice. I like. Needs more though.
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Lady Takara
Professional Psion
"I've got A.D.D. and magic markers. Oh the thrills I will have."
Posts: 542
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Post by Lady Takara on Jul 21, 2007 17:52:58 GMT -5
All I have to say is, kudos for the spelling. That is really important for any site to get their message across.
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zbuksi
Experienced Psion
I am not here
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Post by zbuksi on Aug 8, 2007 16:55:25 GMT -5
Nice, but I agree with Lady Kara
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Post by The Adfeng on Aug 9, 2007 1:56:55 GMT -5
It was pretty good. Needs some more work. I think you should expand on the articles, to make them more "reader friendly". But, so far so good. It looks awesome, the one page has music on it, made my browser lag a little, but other than that, good luck!
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Post by Fearn on Aug 24, 2007 1:45:44 GMT -5
A couple recommendations:
1) Expand your articles, maybe you could just focus on psiballs, and constructs (which are my favourite part of psionics anyway!) then do your bit on meditation. The info you have looks very thorough, and is of good quality! Great job here!
2) Please no music. I love music, I really do, but I just don't think that music has a place on a web page (mainly because I find it annoying...lol). Maybe you could set up a playlist with meditation music on it and have that under your meditation section, but as a link so that we can read about meditation without hearing the music. You could also get really creative and make different playlists for different meditations.
3) I like the backgrounds on 'Home', 'Contact', and 'Comments' pages. I really didn't like the backgrounds for 'How to Make Psiballs' and 'Meditation.' The Psiballs one because it is just too busy and draws away from the text. The Meditation one because it is purple and it blends too well with the bar at the top (you know with Home etc. etc. etc.) after you have clicked the buttons. It also kinda clashes with the rest of the site which is green and blue and gray all colours that match...then BAM purple lol. I like what you did you the rest it is nice, without being too flashy (and drawing away from the text) or too drab (making your site look like a piece of paper).
4) I like the font you have on all the pages, but another recommendation is that you make every page have the same font (which I like personally) or every page have a different font. 'Meditation,' and 'Contact Me' have the different fonts from all the rest.
5) Last but not least, "Ok you can contact me at Icfreaks02@aol.com one thing do not ask what my name is my age or anything like that!" If I may give you an example of a better way to say this:
Ok You can contact me at Icfreaks02@aol.com. One thing, please do not ask about my name , my age, or anything like that!
See? So you can do it in some way like that so that it just flows better.
Were these too harsh? I hope not, because they were all meant to help, but sometimes people get offended when I put it so bluntly...lol
ILuvEire
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