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Post by kajaara on Oct 14, 2007 16:56:26 GMT -5
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Post by JediKaren on Oct 15, 2007 18:35:38 GMT -5
ok here are my comments. I'm going to be blunt with them too:
It's too long. No one likes scrolling forever to reach the bottom. Organize things, use sub boards, have one board with several topics for the telekinesis. Have bi location as part of the astral section. I would be deadly careful having "weapons" on any title of a board. It speaks out fluff and will promote fluff and immatureness, if not fights and violence. Oh, should I mention you could get sued if someone gets hurts and get a lawyer? It's not a good thing for the site's reputation.
Don't name all these different kinesis. It's all just telekinesis used on different material. Some of those kinesis you listed are silly. Wether it is fluff or not, it will attract fluff and discourage semi advance psions from joining. While no newbie likes the advance psions, no site does well without them.
You need a central theme. Something to hold to site together. A reason for making the site. Don't treat the site like a joke or a game. If you are going to teach, teach. If you are going to offer services, HAVE services already made, thought out, planned, and tested *before* making the site and adervertising.
Hide the mod and admin board.
When you move the mouse on a board, all you see is white. You need to play around and fix that.
Why have a psi board and then all those other boards? I would get rid of them or use all those abilites as sub boards.
Invisiblity can not be done and really should not be a board. And dragon energy? Ok please stop watching tv or something....
I'm going to stop. I think my point has been made.
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Apollo
Experienced Psion
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Post by Apollo on Oct 17, 2007 20:13:47 GMT -5
My comments: What - the - f***Seriously. Jesus christ. You have a sh*t load of boards in there. you say it is "loaded with info". All I see is 1, MAYBE TWO, topics per every other board. Upon speculation, these topics just post a COPY AND PASTE from some other major or fluffy website. The template and colors are absolutely painful Why are members going to go there? If they are going out of their way to darn themselves up, why not just go to wingmakers? Oh wait, you have a copy of paste of wingmakers. Nice job. darn, son, ever heard of PSYCHOKINESIS? I do enjoy "Lunarkinesis". Is this the ability to move the moon? I am pretty sure it moves on its own. If not, keep it up buddy  "Starting Psionics" board: You should change the description from "where noobs should look" to "where noobs should come to read about how to navigate away from this site". Seriously, you were not made to make / admin a website. Give up and save us all our retinas. |
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Post by Fearn on Oct 18, 2007 18:26:14 GMT -5
Uh, I just browsed it and I agree with what everyone else said.
The last chant in the spells section is from Charmed...you know that right?
And seriously...black magic? There is no such thing, and you do NOT need to be dabbling in curses if you are using spells from Charmed.
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zedd
Psion Explorer
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Post by zedd on Nov 10, 2007 15:41:07 GMT -5
Your site needs a lot of work. It could be a very good site, but as it is. It is not very good. It is huge but really does not have that much real information except the pressure points thing, and I don't even think that is relevant to a psi site. Keep working on it though, and maybe you will get it. Listen to JK she is amazing.  |
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