my psi website

[codelyoko]

www.freewebs.com/kayakguy429/index.htm
well its not the best, but it does have some simple guides and links
if you would conciter clicking a few links they support the site

[The Adfeng]

Bad introduction. It needs proper grammar. Grammar is the key. Telekenisis is spelled wrong, it is spelled: Telekinesis. The side bar shouldn't be all caps. There should be one page for "Articles" Then link all of your other articles to that one. Your articles arn't long enough, and they arn't spell checked. You need to explain each one thoroughly, and write it as if a complete noob was to try this. At least 600 words per article. Don't condense everything together, it makes it real hard to read. Once you do this, and make some good articles, you'll be pretty good.

[JediKaren]

thepsiworld.proboards37.com/index.cgi?board=link&action=display&thread=1192497460

[sam]

Please improve it
Grammar wise. Overall its good. Take out the advertise too if you can.

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[Apollo]

My biggest problem with this site is this:

"heres a small guide to making a sheild

what you want to do is make a strong psiball visualise it getting larger... and sorrounding your body....

You just made your first sheild!!!"

So because I imagined it, i have one? Psionics does not work like that. You have to have the intent to have it do what you want it to do. You have to program it what to do. If someone who is new comes and reads this, they are going to walk away laughing hysterically.

You need better articles. There is no reason to go to your site for your crap articles instead of going to a good website.

Why make a website that says what EVERY - OTHER - SITE - SAYS?

Grammar.....

Spelling.......


Im not going to rip this site to darn

(I do believe that ads like you have break freewebs' agreement; I dont know for certain, though)

[Fearn]

I'n my opinion you need to get the new IE or Firefox that has the spell checker on it. Then pay very close attention to grammar.

I usually have to rewrite everything I post.