Song Writing

[mrpsionics]

Umm I'm just wondering if any one has ever writen a song if so please share it with us here. Here is my song. It's called Back into Life

You've been living with a storm over your head.
You've been killing till, those people were dead.
You've can't be waiting for to long.

You've been stealing your dreams to far away .
Just incase you need them some other day.
You've been throwing away time.
Just to blacken some spots in your heart.

All you want to do is find away back into life.
You can't make your self go through that again.

You've been watching him for so long.
You've been calling but no one seems to hear you.
I know that I'm out there.

You've been out looking for some one to make things right.
Just for some one to get me throught the light.
All you want to do is find away back into life.
And if you undarken your heart for him.
He'll be there for you in the end.

Sometimes there are times when you don't feel that it's right.
And if any one feels the same way as i do.
You need more confidence.
I don't need more excuses.

All you want to do is find away back into life.
You just can't make your self go through that again.
And if you undarken your heart to him.
You'll know he will be there for you in the end.

[mrpsionics]

This song i made up it's called His Funeral of love. It's kinda short though.

His funeral of love
when the angels cry on the flowers above us.
When his love separates him from her
She was the star shining above him.

She was the air he breathed for years
He was restless and mild
Pray to God that he rests in peace
The last night of his funeral of love
dreaming the question why?

His Funeral of love
when the angels cry on the flowers from above us
when his love separates him from her.
She was the star shining above him.

She was the air he breathed for years
he was restless and mild
pray to God that he rests in peace
the last night of his funeral of love
dreaming the question why?

His Funeral of love
when the angels cry on the flowers from above us
when his love separates him from her.
She was the star shining above him.

Repeat 2 more times.

[odbod]

I'm trying to write a song, multiple songs. It's based off a dream I had, I'm not much of a song writer, but hell, I tried.

Part 1: Time

A great past time
It’s a fresh breath of air
Clean and soft to the touch
The wind blows through my hair

Mindless thoughts sink closer
Why does it sink
And form this link
To only me

The Field of Ais
Oh—The Grassy field of Ais
A portal to another world
Once a year to hold
I wait and wait
I go on back
And step through to face my fate
The problem lacks existence.
Nothing is wrong, I go back to my world.

Friends to join me
Back to the field of ais
There are no screams in glee
Thoughts of happiness is just a big haze
The Field of Ais
Oh—The grassy field of Ais
The one year hold
Doesn’t keep me back
The Field of Ais
There is no limits

[mrpsionics]

WOW!!! Odbod thats really good!!

[odbod]

Thank you

Trying to write the next part.

[odbod]

Part 2: Mystic Ruins

Grass and Dirt
Trees and Leaves
Walk down this dirt path
Along with a calm gentle breeze

I am distracted
I feel good
I am attracted
I feel moved
----Start Rock music----
Walking through the Mystic Ruins
In search of something new
Why must I be distracted
By the feeling of attraction
This forest is just too great
Even with thoughts of hate
----Slow down----
These thoughts of hate
Are truly there
But I don’t seem to care
This forest is just too great
Even with the outside hate

Even if I did care
It wouldn’t seem to matter
----Speed up a bit----
Walking through the Mystic Ruins
In search of my thoughts
This forest has so much power
No good can fade away

Ohh--- The Mystic Ruins