Post by Fearn on Dec 29, 2007 9:51:47 GMT -5
This is what happens when I can't sleep...lol.
1)
I think that this should be rephrased as "the ability to make certain types of constructs the cover your whole body'' or ''the ability to make a certain type of construct that covers your whole body."
It just doesn't sound right when you say it out loud.
2)
I think this should be rephrased as ''The ability to use energy in it's most basic form (also called psi) and make it gather in a certain spot."
3) My charka correction was never fixed.
4) I dunno if you noticed, but on the front page the mission statement is in a different font from the rest of the site. Was this done for a reason?
Wow JK. Usually I find somewhere in the realm of like 10 or 11 (although I didn't check your articles).
*L*O*V*E* *T*H*E* *S*I*T*E*
1)
The ability to make a certain type of constructs that cover your whole body.
I think that this should be rephrased as "the ability to make certain types of constructs the cover your whole body'' or ''the ability to make a certain type of construct that covers your whole body."
It just doesn't sound right when you say it out loud.
2)
The ability to use energy in its most basic form (also called psi) and making it gather in a certain spot.
I think this should be rephrased as ''The ability to use energy in it's most basic form (also called psi) and make it gather in a certain spot."
3) My charka correction was never fixed.
4) I dunno if you noticed, but on the front page the mission statement is in a different font from the rest of the site. Was this done for a reason?
Wow JK. Usually I find somewhere in the realm of like 10 or 11 (although I didn't check your articles).
*L*O*V*E* *T*H*E* *S*I*T*E*
