durial
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Post by durial on Sept 23, 2007 7:07:04 GMT -5
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Cronus
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Post by Cronus on Sept 23, 2007 7:10:15 GMT -5
i only used the copyright thing on the bottem ;D Is that ok? How can i copy style?
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Post by T_Hornberger on Sept 23, 2007 10:40:42 GMT -5
Good article, I like it. You should ask JK to post it on the main site with the other articles.
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Cronus
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Post by Cronus on Sept 23, 2007 10:41:54 GMT -5
I have asked, she said no.
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Post by Dumplins on Sept 23, 2007 13:40:32 GMT -5
Yeah it very good I need more help with receiving
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Cronus
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Post by Cronus on Sept 23, 2007 13:46:37 GMT -5
I am glad you think it is good!
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Post by JediKaren on Sept 23, 2007 15:04:05 GMT -5
it's too short, with not enough detail, and doesn't give new or better information than the one that's on the main site.
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Post by Lady Takara on Sept 23, 2007 15:28:31 GMT -5
As JK says, not enough information, extremely short. A good article is generally a bit lengthy with noteworthy information. So here is my wonderful critique for you ^__________________^
-as I already stated to short -fragmented sentences -telepathic combact? sounds to much RP-ish. It would be more of a "psychic" battle, but this site is not about psychic battles. -is it unethical? explain. besides the fact that people wouldn't appreciate it. the positives. the negatives. -give personal experiences it's always better -this more sounds like empathic broadcasting with emotions. -telepathy is a very imprecise meathod. why? because it isn't like a book, it is more abstract. simple images like triangle, or circle could be seen, but what about more complex? like people. -while telepathy in books invovle words, would telepathy in the real word be capable of it? why or why not? -explain other possible ways of visualization. -couldn't sending anger be an assualt? it is a negative emotion. what about other negative emotions? unless permitted. but some people, like me do not deal well or cannot handle anger. -be more clearer on what you mean by "having a clearer mind, is better." Yesh I understand how medication can help clear the mind, but how calm is calm do you need to be ? Focusing on just that one thing ? Of course, I understand a noisy mind doesn't help, but you need to be more clear in this area.
I think this is enough for you to deal with for now. Once you write more, I'll continue ripping it apart. Because you see, that is what Jedi Karen did for my own article. An article, or anything else that is written, should be at least edited once. Many writers go through this process with their publishers. Before it is published on Jedi Karen's site, could you not expect the same thing ?
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Post by The Adfeng on Sept 23, 2007 19:40:38 GMT -5
Yes, it needs more complexity, explain it more. As with my construct article, i'm still working on it. -_- sorry JK
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Cronus
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Post by Cronus on Sept 23, 2007 23:57:57 GMT -5
Yes, i see all of your points, thank you.
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Post by Cronus on Sept 24, 2007 0:45:37 GMT -5
Telepathy Telepathy is the communication between minds without any sensory perception. That is basically the ability to read thoughts, receive and send thoughts telepathically. With telepathy you and the other telepath you are communicating with are basically radio towers, receiving and sending information to one and other. A strong telepath can look with in ones mind, to some; this is considered a telepathic attack or assault. This not very nice. Next thing you find yourself in a telepathic battle, just because you didn’t ask. But is the totally unethical? To many, yes. They feel it is an invasion of space. Telepathy is a skill many would love to have, this why I am going to try my best to help those so many. Clear your mind as you would whilst meditating; if you feel it is necessary, meditate by all means. The more clear your mind, the better. An open mind is always better, have a cluttered mind is no good. Having a clear mind relaxes one, but a cluttered mind makes one restless. An easy way to clear your mind is to sit in a comfortable position. Close your eyes and take deep, slow breathes. You should feel relaxed but not tired. Okay, once you have cleared your mind decide what form of telepathy you want to do; sending or receiving. If it is receiving, the best thing you can do is to keep a clear mind and relaxed body. For now we will focus on sending. You may want to send an emotion, I find send emotions easy, but you may prefer sending numbers, colors or basic pictures. To send anything you will want to get a clear picture of it in your head. With emotions, this is easy because all you need is a strong feel for the emotion, fill your self up with the emotion, be it anger, be it joy, fill yourself up. Be cautious to what emotions the receiver can handle though, some people can handle other emotions better than others. What that means is, it is not just OK to send someone a negative emotion, just because you can handle it. Some consider this assault too. Other negative emotions would be, sadness, grief, ect. Moving on swiftly; you might want to add a picture that strongly relates to that emotion. Once you have that in mind, focus on the receiver. Get a clear picture of them in your head. I like to make a tunnel between my mind and the receiver’s when doing telepathy. Take what ever you are sending and make it as clear as possible and push it down that tunnel. If it’s an emotion, visualize the receiver full of that emotion once it reaches him. By few I have been asked, “Can you actually send words?” My answer is yes, for the simple reason, it has happened with me. A tip for when sending a picture, try make it as basic as possible but at the same time it must relate quite good with what you want the receiver to see. Here are some suggestions on visualization. Give your visual hologram a feel, smell, color, basically anything it would have in real life. This helps a ton! Now to receiving, you get people who are better and receiving more than sending and vice versa. Clear your mind and prepare the same as you would when sending. Get in a comfortable position. Open your mind to the world around you, let your mind become an empty void. Don’t think about anything just relax. Let your mind be subject to any thought that is not your own. If things pop up in your head and won’t go away, there is a chance you have just done telepathy. If you got it wrong, try again. Remember telepathy is not always precise because of all the variables involved such as, clearness of what ever it is being sent, clearness of both, sender and receivers mind, both senders and receivers telepathic abilities. That list goes on, so don’t be put of when dealing with telepathy and you get it wrong, it is life. We were made to fail and then to learn from our mistakes. I wrote this article to give guide lines to psionic newbies. Try this and is it doesn’t feel right, change it to make it feel better and more comfortable, it is you who is doing the psionics, so why should it feel wrong to you? That is what will make you progress. ~..Mind~Crush.. Thanks for reading, leave your comment! ©Copyright 2007-2008 ..Mind~Crush.. his productions. All Rights Reserved. This is not to be put on any forums with out my personal permission.
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Post by rasputin on Oct 24, 2007 15:42:25 GMT -5
Nice, very to the point kinda, good for revision but for newbies i think its too condensed, first times need a lot of explanations and examples etc. Divide into more paragraphs, follow essay writing principles. One idea in each paragraph. introduce in 1st line, explain in body, conclude in last line. That way the reader perceives the idea clearly. Still, i liked it very much, gave me a few ideas. Thanks!
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Post by sleepyhollow94 on Nov 16, 2007 19:12:08 GMT -5
Nice, very to the point kinda, good for revision but for newbies i think its too condensed, first times need a lot of explanations and examples etc. Divide into more paragraphs, follow essay writing principles. One idea in each paragraph. introduce in 1st line, explain in body, conclude in last line. That way the reader perceives the idea clearly. Still, i liked it very much, gave me a few ideas. Thanks! I'm new here, and I actually find it pretty easy to understand (not to condradict you, but probably because I understand things easily.)
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Post by ashvin1jedi on Nov 29, 2007 2:50:59 GMT -5
THANKS A TON!
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Post by jupen on Jan 9, 2008 15:29:10 GMT -5
where is it, it doesn' t show up?
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